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Wisp of Memories Gone By

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+ This is an old portrait shot I did with my friend Amy. (also in Jet Black New Year) I like the image, but something about it doesn't seem complete to me. The original colors were flawed (too orange) and the focus isn't as sharp as I'd like. Apart from that, though, it brings back happy memories.

+ Enjoy! (By the way, be honest, brutal if need be...I encourage real critiques. ;) (Wink) )
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This is so lovely. The B&W is a great choice. I like the "wisp" part of the title. It seems like a wisp - a wisp of hair, of wind, a whisper. I love how she's almost shying alway from the camera - that would be me. It sort of gives her an air of mystery - you can't see her eyes so you wonder. Wonder what she's thinking, why she's looking away. The soft blurriness evokes a feeling of a faded memory. It's a lovely portrait, I like it. :)